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[SLIM SIZE, POWERFUL BATTERY ]: Feel the heat with our 5V2A UL/CE-certified 10000mAH battery, which makes the men's heated jacket warm in 5 hours.Card-sized battery is smaller and lighter than other standard battery, offering the optimized fit without feeling bulk and annoying while sitting in the battery pocket. Built-in power indicator display screen can help you check its battery level at any time. What's more, it has USB port for charging smartphones and other mobile devices.
[PREMIUM HEATING PERFORMANCE]：Our electric vest built-in high-quality Carbon Nanotube heating elements to heat the clothes evenly and heat up quickly. 8 Heating Zone generate heat across core body areas ( neck & back, abdomen, waist & dorsum), keep your whole body and hands wrapped in Warmth!
[SMART 5 IN 1 SMART CONTROLLER]: 3 Independent Heating Zones and 3 Heating Levels, help you to adjust the perfect temperature for different zones! With Special Light-out design, the controller's light can be light on / off at you will while the heating vest is still heating meet your use in different environments. One click to power on/off, easy to operate by a simple press！
[WHAT WILL YOU GET]: We provide a complete and fashion package, and you will get 1x Men Heated Vest , 1x Power Bank, 1x Mesh Laundry Bags, 1x User Manual, our worry-free 12 month warranty and 7 day/ 24H friendly customer service, which is a great gift for your family, friends and anyone you loved for Christmas, Thanksgiving, birthdays, or a special gift of warmth for yourself.
[SOFT FLEECE & ULTIMATE COMFORT]: The men's heated vest is made from soft filament fleece. With a high stand collar and full zip closure, your core body will stay warm while freeing up the arms for active use. The perfect jacket layering piece for ultimate range of motion and comfort during cold winter days. 2 zip-up hand pockets are perfectly sized to to keep hands and small items warm and secure.This vest is ideal for wearing alone or bundling with a jacket to add warmth.
[GREAT FOR ALL OCCASIONS]: This heated vest for men with battery pack is perfect for daily commute, or some outdoor activities like cycling, climbing, camping, hiking, skiing even in a way-too-cold office! The cold weather presents us with challenges, but it doesn't stop us from enjoying our favourite activities or looking our best.
